WALT describe a character
I must remember to: SHOW NOT TELL!
Introduction - who and where
First Paragraph - what he looks like
Second Paragraph - his characteristics
Third Paragraph - his actions
Conclusion - action and observation
Begin your writing here:
He creeps across his secret pitch black cave hoping no one would spot him. He has all the gadgets he need’s in his belt of his own. He only works with black and very dark grey. Wearing his awesome costume that is awfully smelly he quickly customizes into his bat costume before anyone see’s him change.
He marched around Gotham city searching for danger. “ Look at that prisoner escape I should go help them catch him” he said. He swoops down and kicks his butt. He quickly drags him back to the prison where he belongs.
His arch enemy is Joker, Joker always escapes some how. Whenever he tries to finish him off he escapes. So he just calls him a coward. Then he zoomed to his secret cave before the news people want to ask stupid questions.
His sidekick is Robin he tells him when he need’s to kick someone’s butt. Robin goes with him when he need’s help. Guess what he also has this awesome light which shines in the sky so he knows there is danger. Whenever he spots it, he creeps around Gotham city trying to find danger. When he finds some baddie he talks in a really deep voice so he is more scary.
This was who I was talking about By Curtis,